Keep everything as it it just fix the parts that need to be edited (they have comments) Everything should be less than a page because the writer should erase my wordy sentences and talk about behavioral modification. For example, they gave the participants pedometers, and encouraging physical Activity (for behavioral modification.) Besides that, the comments of my professor were “you list may variables, and you talk generally about behavioral modification. try to get rid of some of the information that is not relevant, and Focus on how the researchers tried to change the participants’ behavior. try to get rid of some of the information that is not relevant, and Focus on how the researchers tried to change the participants’ behavior.