04/04/2019
23:10
I just want the essay to talk more like a story on how I struggle and how I didnt back down and keep trying
on pre- cal
I dont want my essay to complain about how bad the teacher is
and for the conclusion I want the essay to summary or to talk about what I learn from failing
and it is ok to fail but explain how to learn from it
and to keep trying and dont back down
but it is ok to fail ones a while
as long as u try
I want the essay to have good details
instead of easy word or simply words
This is not just any normal essay it is my collage essay. When writing this essay think about a time where you need help with a subject at school and you did your best but your fail that class cause the teacher wasn’t so good.
My essay topic is: The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you and what did you learn from the experience?
Background on my essay:
My essay is about me failing Pre- Cal. My Pre- Cal teacher Mr. Uy isn’t a really good teacher because of the lack of time he use in class for talking about life lessons out of no where, bad a teaching the lesson. When I say bad at teaching I literal mean that sometimes he would only go over one homework problem for notes and thats all or either he did go over the notes but it doesn’t match with the homework. I did ask him for help when I don’t understand but its hard to understand a teacher when they don’t speak English that clear. Mr. Uy is from the Philippines so when he speak English he has some kind of accent which I don’t mind at first but soon it really gets to you. I use UH Manoa which helps with math, science, English, and writing. UH Manoa is an app from the collage University in Hawaii of Manao. The app was design to help homework. But I could go on it all the time cause I have other school work not just pre – cal. When Mr. Uy gives quizzes which is every lesson it is worth more than tests. Every day is it always learn a new lesson, homework finish up, and then quiz. I never know whats on it cause he won’t tell us. Please write my collage essay with good details and word choice to use. Think about the time you had a hard time with school subject because the teacher was bad.
Outline:
I. Intro
• A. Here, talk about the situation in general. Like you failed and stuff
II. Body
• A. Main Idea 1: Class
• 1. talk about how class time wasn’t used to how you would have benefitted from it (aka the life talks that he gave).
• 2. Give example about taking notes and how he would sometimes only do one of the homework problems and that’s it and how it wasn’t enough
• 3. Talk about how despite all this, you took good notes and tried your best to take in everything that he was saying
• B. Main Idea 2: Homework
• 1. Talk about how you would go home to find out that the notes did not help you with the homework at all because it was two different things.
• 2. Talk about how you tried to do it yourself but you couldn’t understand the concept/lesson on your own.
• 3. Talk about how despite all this, you still tried to do the homework as best as you can
• C. Main Idea 3: Quizzes
• 1. Here you can talk about how you had a quiz every class and how sometimes it would be similar to the homework, which you couldn’t understand, therefore you had trouble doing the quiz
• 2. Talk about how you tried your best to answer the questions
• 3. Then mention that you would fail the quiz because you didn’t understand and how the quizzes were worth more points than the tests
• 4. Talk about how stressed you were from failing your quizzes
• D. Main Idea 4: Getting Help
• 1. Talk about how you were stressed about your grades slipping, so you decided to get help from your teacher.
• 2. talk about his accent and that you were still confused after you would leave your meeting with him
• 3. Talk about how you went to UH Manoa’s tutoring, how helpful it was
• 4. Mention that you tried to get help as much as you could from them, but you were also balancing your other assignments
III. Conclusion
• What you learn about failure?
• End with a strong ending
I want the introduction to start out strong and catch the reader attention. The conclusion has to end strong with a message. The body paragraph has to flow together nicely.
