Instructions: As we’ve been discussing all semester, careful editing is an integral part of the writing process. Now that you have feedback from your instructor, you’ll need to apply it by rewriting your proposal. The rewrite is worth 100 points. If you do not follow your instructor’s feedback, your rewrite grade could be lower than the grade you earned on your draft. If you do not submit a rewrite that includes changes, you will receive a grade of zero.
NOTE: Please, I needed you’re rewriting, fixing and adding some information follow the ” draft of written” file below. My professor gave me feedback last week, so I could able to rewrite and get ready for “final written. I needed your help. I took some pictures included ” the feedback”, check it out and follow what my professor wrote, and what she wanted this proposal needed to done.