First of all, please change the gap part in literature review, it is not appropriate. Please write gap as “ the problems of Arabic students who are in the UK for academic purposes ’ , not something related to the data collection style.

 

Please write 2 general dissertation questions, previous ones are not appropriate now.

Firstly, please choose the most interesting parts to discuss. It should be 4000-4200. Please give some additional references. 5 to 8 articles (depending on you). When you give each reference please show where the data has collected (school, uni, women, men) distinguish the students which you discuss. Please discuss all themes (shown in findings part). Discuss students and teachers under one same theme heading which has the same themes. Additionally, main part of the articles is related to university when it comes to the articles related to the school environment please mention socialization process and show school behavior as a source of university problems.

 

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