Research question: Please think over another formulation of the research question. The word death is there repeated twice, but replacing it with, for example, “end of life,” does not sound so good.

Introduction: Please develop the introduction into a more complex picture/appearance, both the introduction and the whole essay! At the same time, in this section, you should really introduce the topic (please see the comment) – please correct it!
I also attached Abstract, which originally belonged to this essay, but is not included because it is no longer a requirement of the essay. Maybe somehow you can use it to correct the introduction.

In my work is often said: “In this essay, it is argued…” etc. This formulation seems easy. Please, try to change the sentence or sentences according to the context, so that it is not said so directly.

According to the comment and according to me as well, the essay needs to be better organized by individual themes (love, marriage, nature, figures of speech). At the beginning of each body paragraph, there should be a broad sentence introducing the whole paragraph. It should indicate what will be said. But it must be written in a professional form. And also, there must be conclusion at the end of each paragraph. Each paragraph should begin and end with the point I have made, and I must always return to the research question with each paragraph and with each paragraph answer it again and again! This is the most important thing!

Quotes!!!!! The writer forgot to include quotes! This is one of the most important! When referring to specific poems, please include a quote from the poem! And in front of the quote and behind the quote, there must be a sentence, directly referring to the quote! At the same time, please, include other direct quotes in the essay that can be from different sources that someone directly said, for example from a book.

One whole topic I’m referring to in the essay is Figures of speech. I would need to develop this topic much more and write about it more. It is very important! At the beginning of the paragraph, I should list them all and then always start with what figure of speech I am describing and then talk about the example from their poems + include quotes.