i need to edit this research paper to receive a better grade. I gather the information through a survey i am experimenting the significance difference between female and male drivers. which genders tends to speed more, be more aggressive and cause accidents. I submitted a total of 16 surveys; 11 to females, 5 to males, to determine what gender speeds more but i found no significance difference in the genders. I don’t have to attach any tables so no need to do so. In the attachment you can see my first draft. i need a lot of work in my introduction, method, results and discussion. Feel free to use different reference, no need to be the same. I need to revise this paper for Monday to receive a better grade. (The red word in the parentheses are my teachers comment.)