Description : Compare and Contrast the Zhou and Qin Dynasty. Should be 5 paragraphs.

There MUST BE A RATIO of PARAGRAPHS – THERE MUST BE 2 CONTRASTS AND 1 COMPARE PARAGRAPH

1 – Thesis statement should include time, place, example and (3 categories) social, political, and economic examples of the two dynasties Zhou and Qin

2 – paragraph should have example of 1st category POLITICAL with 3 pieces of evidence

3 – paragraph should have example of 2nd category ECONOMIC with 3 pieces of evidence

4 – paragraph should have example of 3rd category SOCIAL with 3 pieces of evidence

Conclusion should rephrase thesis. – Relate to “whats next” transition to whats next. Ex: Shang dynasty to the Han Dynasty

USE VALUE AND POWER WORDS