thesis
Women are the sole victims of social patriarchy and they are regarded as weak, problematics and inferior to man because of societal expectations which demand that women follow their assigned roles and are shunned if they cannot.
answer for main points
why / how women are the sole victims of social patriarchy
Why are they regarded as weak and problematics and inferior to man
why / how societal expectations which demand that women follow their assigned roles
How are they shunned
only use given 4 sources
story of an hour
a secret sorrow
a sorrowful woman
rose for emily
Argumentative Essay (Rough Draft)
Working thesis statement.
Women are the sole victims of social patriarchy and they are regarded as weak, problematics and inferior to man because of societal expectations which demand that women follow their assigned roles and are shunned if they cannot.
Main point 1.
This paragraph will explore the reasons why women are weak and inferior and their attitude and mentality of becoming subordinate and inferior to man; a situation that would make patriarchal authority and social injustice.
Male power in a patriarchy can be found in our society today. This patriarchy can be found in family, community and work force. Men are presented to be rulers while women are being perceived to be less intelligent, less capable and less worthy. By 21st Century, Patriarchy has shaped our cultural practices and affects how we think and behave.
What’s happening in the text
Patriarchal authority imposed on the people in the community is one of the social injustices. Given the predetermined course of the life of women, the code of conduct forces them to take control of their own life and live on terms that master their fates. As a result, women readily deny even the death of their fathers as seen by Emily and Mallard. As long as the women are capable of surviving financially and psychologically, their future seems imminent. Women are forced to become romantically adaptive to any man even the one from a lower social class. The financial necessity influences the manner and standards of how a woman behaves. Although a genuine woman needs companionship, the people think they are weak and needy.
Mrs. Mallard in the Story of an hour, depicts the woman’s character of being afflicted with a heart trouble. She could not bear the sad message of her husband’s death. Women, therefore, are seen with a paralyzed inability to accept the truth. Women in the community are seen to have certain strength as seen by Emily and Mallard in the death of their fathers (Chopin).
Gail Godwin Short story talks about a woman who goes through life feeling unhappy and, in this context, it is a strongly polemical feminist story on patriarchy. This woman is portrayed as a kind of “cloistered queen.”
Quote from the text
“She began yelping without tears, retching in between. The man woke in alarm and carried her in his arms to bed. The boy followed them up the stairs, saying,”
“It’s all right, Mommy,” but this made her scream (Godwin, 1).
Analysis of the quote and relevance to the thesis
From this quote, the woman has an attitude of being weak, inferior, unproductive and irresponsible despite having a caring and responsible husband. So, this kind of attitude in women can make patriarchal authority to prevail.
Main point 2.
This paragraph will argue about societal expectations which demand that women follow their assigned roles which cause social injustices.
Marriage
Role of wives
Women are relegated to hearth and home. They are expected to clean, mothering and serving husband. These work are considered less important.
Stereotypes Failure of not having children
What’s happening in the text
However, marriage is portrayed as a resolution for women. As seen in A Secret Sorrow, a woman will be happily fulfilled in marriage. Since marriage solves problems and is a source of unending happiness, once a woman is married, there is no more anxiety. A Rose for Emily is narrated by a plural we voice, it stands for the collective town. Women are therefore seen to represent the aristocratic heritage of the town. From Emily’s eccentricity and being pitiable, the people in town were able to watch and judge her behind closed doors. Indeed, the darker motive of Miss Emily makes the people scrutinize her life hence taking pleasure in women’s fall to poverty and a social feeling of superiority.
Kate Chopin talked about how Louse Mallard became heart-broken with physical exhaustion reaping down her soul due to the death of his husband that never was. The woman lost the courage and worth of living without her husband until she died of heart disease.
The role of women as wives and mothers always diminish at the death of their husbands. From the stories, the women competently fulfill all the role of a mother in a durable, healthy and gentle manner. As a result of a discernible cause, the women no longer need to carry up that responsibility. They become sick and their feelings and comfort cannot be overturned. The women’s increasing retreat makes her need to be urgently busy so as to It is a consequence of a woman leaving her family and retiring from the role of a woman. Women feel beautiful, complete and whole in their role as wives and mothers as is for Faye in A Secret Sorrow.
In both stories of A Secret Sorrow and A Sorrowful woman, women portray the idea of marriage and family. Marriage with children is presented as a perfect and completely fulfilling family. Therefore, marriage and family in these stories is the antithesis of happiness. Although from A Secret of Sorrow, marriage is directly encouraged, the other stories, A Sorrowful Woman, A Rose for Emily and Story of an Hour, marriage is indirectly questioned and discouraged. The women in these stories experience conflict which comes before marriage. Misery and torment struck women because of not having children. In A Secret Sorrow, Van Der Zee suggests that marriage with children will make Faye and her loved one be truly happy. As a result, Faye feels that being unable to have children cuts her off from Kai’s love.
Quote from the text
“She wept at once, with sudden, wild abandonment, in her sister’s arms (Chopin, 6),” … “When the doctors came they said she had died of heart disease (Chopin, 8).”
Analysis of the quote and relevance to the thesis
From this quote, a woman is seen to lack courage to live on her own. Women fully depend on their husbands and treat them as superiors whose absence make life worthless.
Main point 3
This paragraph will talk about HOW WOMEN ARE SHUNNED IF THEY DON’T FULLFILL THEIR ROLES.
The main point will be supported by “A Secrete Sorrow” by Karen van der Zee and “A Rose for Emily” by Faulkner et al.
Literary Essay
Women are the sole victims of social patriarchy and injustices and they are regarded as weak, problematics and inferior to man because of societal expectations which demand that women follow their assigned roles and are shunned if they cannot.