• Start paper with (“I argue…”), 2) Evidence and Analysis, then 3) briefly State the Significance of your argument (on this, and all other issues
• Follow the specific forum topic assignments (though, of course, you have some leeway to follow a good idea where it goes, as long as you make a narrow, and original, argument that analyzes the text)
• Analyze the language, don’t just rehash the plot, and don’t just quote without explaining your unique and creative ideas about the language you quote.
Three inconclusive paths to wellness
Three inconclusive paths to wellness
Forum assignment (This Unit’s assignment is a bit more complex, so please read this carefully so you can respond successfully): Tayo’s quest for wellness in this first chunk of the novel includes at least three main elements, or three main paths, but so far all seem flawed. First, his experience at the VA hospital and with modern treatment (“Modern” though in the 1940s is not “modern” today, though I ask you to forget what you know about effective treatments today–stick to the world represented in the novel). Second, his experience with Old Ku’oosh, the traditional medicine man. Third, spending time with his veteran friends. Now, of course, we all know that binge drinking is not a cure for PTSD, not at all. So don’t waste time simply rehashing the fact that drinking is probably not the best thing for him. But the drinking times are often called a “ritual” in the novel, and their drinking involves telling stories—and “narrative” is a major issue in Ceremony (see the Unit 3 and Unit 4 video lectures, more in the coming Unit 5): both the way the narrative of the plot unfolds, and how stories (both personal narratives and larger social narratives–see the video lecture) interact with people’s identities and relationships and health. The drinking binges also offer two things Tayo hopes might be therapeutic —forgetting the present pain and retreating into memories, and/or cathartic bouts of anger and violence .
So the novel asks us to think about these three attempted routes to health, but, I again repeat, the novel doesn’t represent any of them as the ultimate cure for Tayo. But the first and second may seem at least a bit helpful? And the third may contain some clues to the overall messages of the novel? In your forum posts, I’d like you to contribute to our understanding of these three paths. Below are two caveats:
To a large extent, you’ll have to put your own medical knowledge and/or personal experiences in the background (and I know that can be tough) and instead concentrate on what the novel is saying about them. Sometimes students want to say, for example, “he should be on SSRIs and have a designated therapist” etc. or “his experience is like my cousin’s when he returned for war” or similar things … well, I’m sure you are right, but that doesn’t help us interpret this fictional novel, so no matter how interesting they are, such comments are not terribly helpful. Instead, ask: how are these three “treatments” represented? Why do they fail in the novel? What may be their potential strengths? As always, be sure to pay close attention to the language the novel uses about these three elements. Since 500 words is very short, you may comment quickly on all three but the ideal post would probably concentrate your close-reading analytical skills on one of the three.
Finally, as you think about these three “Treatments” (1=Mid-20th century modern psychotherapy and medical care, 2=Traditional Pueblo Medicine Man ceremonies and cures, and 3=Socialization with his Indian Veteran Buddies, including drinking, talking, storytelling, repressing, yelling, and fighting), try to construct an argument about what his experience with these three “treatments” tell us about the symbolic/ideological/political/philosophical work of the novel. That might make a good final thought for this forum post because, for this Unit, I realize that the final part of the ideal forum post, what the “PowerPoint” calls “The Significance” of your ideas, is tough to do because you’ve only read one portion of the novel. So end with a comment about how 1, 2, or all 3, of these attempted routes to health give some symbolic meaning to Tayo’s character, or the world he lives in. In other words, don’t settle for just analyzing Tayo, the person, as though he were real. What messages is the text sending via him and his illness and the paths to health?
• Start paper with (“I argue…”), 2) Evidence and Analysis, then 3) briefly State the Significance of your argument (on this, and all other issues
• Follow the specific forum topic assignments (though, of course, you have some leeway to follow a good idea where it goes, as long as you make a narrow, and original, argument that analyzes the text)
• Analyze the language, don’t just rehash the plot, and don’t just quote without explaining your unique and creative ideas about the language you quote.
Three inconclusive paths to wellness
Three inconclusive paths to wellness
Forum assignment (This Unit’s assignment is a bit more complex, so please read this carefully so you can respond successfully): Tayo’s quest for wellness in this first chunk of the novel includes at least three main elements, or three main paths, but so far all seem flawed. First, his experience at the VA hospital and with modern treatment (“Modern” though in the 1940s is not “modern” today, though I ask you to forget what you know about effective treatments today–stick to the world represented in the novel). Second, his experience with Old Ku’oosh, the traditional medicine man. Third, spending time with his veteran friends. Now, of course, we all know that binge drinking is not a cure for PTSD, not at all. So don’t waste time simply rehashing the fact that drinking is probably not the best thing for him. But the drinking times are often called a “ritual” in the novel, and their drinking involves telling stories—and “narrative” is a major issue in Ceremony (see the Unit 3 and Unit 4 video lectures, more in the coming Unit 5): both the way the narrative of the plot unfolds, and how stories (both personal narratives and larger social narratives–see the video lecture) interact with people’s identities and relationships and health. The drinking binges also offer two things Tayo hopes might be therapeutic —forgetting the present pain and retreating into memories, and/or cathartic bouts of anger and violence .
So the novel asks us to think about these three attempted routes to health, but, I again repeat, the novel doesn’t represent any of them as the ultimate cure for Tayo. But the first and second may seem at least a bit helpful? And the third may contain some clues to the overall messages of the novel? In your forum posts, I’d like you to contribute to our understanding of these three paths. Below are two caveats:
To a large extent, you’ll have to put your own medical knowledge and/or personal experiences in the background (and I know that can be tough) and instead concentrate on what the novel is saying about them. Sometimes students want to say, for example, “he should be on SSRIs and have a designated therapist” etc. or “his experience is like my cousin’s when he returned for war” or similar things … well, I’m sure you are right, but that doesn’t help us interpret this fictional novel, so no matter how interesting they are, such comments are not terribly helpful. Instead, ask: how are these three “treatments” represented? Why do they fail in the novel? What may be their potential strengths? As always, be sure to pay close attention to the language the novel uses about these three elements. Since 500 words is very short, you may comment quickly on all three but the ideal post would probably concentrate your close-reading analytical skills on one of the three.
Finally, as you think about these three “Treatments” (1=Mid-20th century modern psychotherapy and medical care, 2=Traditional Pueblo Medicine Man ceremonies and cures, and 3=Socialization with his Indian Veteran Buddies, including drinking, talking, storytelling, repressing, yelling, and fighting), try to construct an argument about what his experience with these three “treatments” tell us about the symbolic/ideological/political/philosophical work of the novel. That might make a good final thought for this forum post because, for this Unit, I realize that the final part of the ideal forum post, what the “PowerPoint” calls “The Significance” of your ideas, is tough to do because you’ve only read one portion of the novel. So end with a comment about how 1, 2, or all 3, of these attempted routes to health give some symbolic meaning to Tayo’s character, or the world he lives in. In other words, don’t settle for just analyzing Tayo, the person, as though he were real. What messages is the text sending via him and his illness and the paths to health?