(1). PARAGRAPH: OUTLINE TEMPLATE.
Topic: Why I chose to earn a degree from Liberty University
The First Main Point: Liberty University online degree program provides easy access to my degree program
Support for the First Main Point: Liberty University online program allows me the flexibility to work while I attend school online, and also the university is able to work around my schedule; while allowing me more flexible time.
The Second Main Point: Liberty University is military friendly
Support for the Second Main Point: While other schools charge more for tuition, the university charge much less for military personnel and their family.
The Third Main Point: Liberty University has the tool that I need to succeed in my degree
Support for the Third Main Point: The university has a degree program that is suited for me. Their career program is what I do need to accomplish my future goal.
Concluding sentence: Attending Liberty University has made it easy for me to achieve my degree. Choosing Liberty was the best choice that I made in my college search. Liberty is preparing me to sail high up the chain.
(2). PARAGRAPH PREWRITING.
Topic: why I chose to earn a degree from Liberty University
I chose to earn a degree from Liberty University, because its online degree program provides easy access to my business degree program. Liberty University online program allows me the flexibility to work, while I attend school; Liberty University is ever ready to work around my schedule to make learning stress-free, while balancing my life as well. Liberty University is military friendly, while other schools charge more for tuition, Liberty university charges much less for military personnel and their family. Great military friendly schools such as Liberty university, has offered a tuition discounts for me as a spouse of a service member, to be able to afford payment toward my education. It indeed provides service members and their family with the material needed for success in their endeavors. My experience as a spouse to a service member has been very smooth here at Liberty. I was provided a book vouchers at the start of my journey in this college, which took the stress of taking money out of my packet off my shoulder. Liberty university has the tools that I would need to succeed in my degree program. The university has a degree program that is suited for me with the instruments that are essential for me to accomplish my future goals and aspirations, through the assistance of the abled professors at the university. Liberty university, being a Christian college, produces more than graduates and qualified job applicants, who are champions for Christ; the university sends disciples like myself after graduation, into the world to continue to do great things for Christ. Liberty University, though a Christian university, takes its students education very serious. Liberty University recognizes just how high the stakes are in producing Christian leaders, and in producing college educated disciples. When the faculty and administration send you out to represent the faith, they want you to be equipped, representing the Gospel well through your witness of intellect and excellence. Liberty university standards are even more thorough than secular college. Choosing Liberty was the best choice that I made in my college search. Liberty University is preparing me to sail high up the chain; they have made it easy for me to continue my degree in business in a faith-based organization. Liberty prepares you to make disciples for Christ in the world, while working in your chosen field.
PROFESSOR FEEDBACK: (The rough draft attempts to follow the outline. The required word count (200–400 words) is not met but is close to the minimum or maximum. Need to trim down and focus on topic sentence and concluding sentence. Also, some editing needed).
(3). YOUR THREAD INSTRUCTIONS FOR PARAGRAPH FINAL DRAFT.
You will edit and revise your prewriting paragraph into a well-constructed, final paragraph. The paragraph must be double-spaced with 12-point font and include proper capitalization, spelling, punctuation, word usage, and sentence structure. The paragraph must be a single paragraph of 200–400 words and show evidence of revisions made based on your editing skills and the professor’s feedback from the prewriting assignment.
