Please write a brief narrative describing yourself, your career goals and your understanding of Health Care Informatics. You may discuss influences on your intellectual development, educational and cultural opportunities (or lack of them) which have been available to you, and the ways in which these experiences have affected you. This should not be a recording of facts already listed on the application; it should give the Admissions Committee a better sense of who you are and why you are applying to the Master of Science in Health Care Informatics Program at the University of San Diego. (Guideline: 500 words or less)

The prompts are listed. I covered all the prompts, but I went too indepth and need to summarize some areas in order to shorten the paper overall.
I really just need my original personal statement edited and shortened a little bit.