Personal Persuasive Essay – has to be personal AND persuasive

I am an Indian-Canadian male student living in Ontario currently in 12th grade. I really need a high mark on this assignment Below I have the instructions for the assignment and an exemplar that my teacher provided. The quality needs to be at par or higher than the quality of the exemplar. Please read the instructions carefully and try to make it very personal. You can write anything about me, and make sure to use the rhetorical triangle. Do not cite secondary sources.

I am an Indian-Canadian male student living in Ontario currently in 12th grade. I really need a high mark on this assignment Below I have the instructions for the assignment and an exemplar that my teacher provided. The quality needs to be at par or higher than the quality of the exemplar. Please read the instructions carefully and try to make it very personal. You can write anything about me, and make sure to use the rhetorical triangle. Do not cite secondary sources.